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Soldier
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:14:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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A soldier is ready to fight
So you can sleep in peace at night
They will always do what’s right
They fight for you and me
So freedom can stay free
They are all they can be
They are the backbone of this country
They are all alone on the front lines
Ease their minds and bring them home
Copyright ©
jmpy84
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2005-03-27 02:14:27]
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Re: Soldier
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:41:34 AM AEST
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| nice write try using a different rhyming scheme...im not one to criticize though, its just an idea |
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Re: Soldier
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:12:47 AM AEST
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there's nothing wrong with this write.
Good work and a masterpeice for all our soilders.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:35:31 AM AEST
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I like that true I dont think that ppl appreciate our soldiers enough, we owe all of our life's to them!!!!!!!
XOJill |
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Re: Soldier
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:49:24 AM AEST
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Great write Josh. Raise a glass to all the soldiers that risk their lives to keep us safe.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Soldier
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:25:02 PM AEST
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TWB thruth wisdom beauty . . . i agree and u r
an excellant writer . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Soldier
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by Jessicahodge on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:08:31 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem. My husband is currently in Iraq and it is people like you who help us keep going. Thank you |
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