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For the love of water in you
Contributed by
Namesaretaken
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I shall dive head first into the hot spring of elated love
These waters will either comfort me like a soft bed
Or bury me drowning in a cold watery grave
Chip away my rusted armor
For desire of simultaneous heart beats
Keeps me taking all off
Exposing vital organs to puncture
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2005-03-26 22:52:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: For the love of water in you
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylady on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:17:05 AM AEST (User
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It was ok but the same time my mind was
wondering in a wrong direction.... Nice..... |
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