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Self Control
Contributed by
vador5
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I watch myself hurt,
And tremble with fear.
It's I'm comiting suicide,
Without being comitted.
But my happieness,
and my friends ,
look down on me,
To see if I'm still alive,
From downing too much acid.
It calms my nerves,
And takes me away,
And puts me to sleep.
I forgot that I was Scratching my head,
Now I'm bleeding all night.
I go Under my covers,
To make this dream disappear,
But Five hours later,
My covers are soak with tears.
Copyright ©
vador5
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2005-03-26 22:45:34]
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Re: Self Control
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by PeaceLovHppnes on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:50:51 PM AEST
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Belive me, you are not the only one with issues. Everyone has them...some are just more serious than others. No matter what you are feeling right now...a new day is yet to come. Put a smile on your face and stand up to those problems that bring you down.
I really enjoyed the last four lines of your poem..i look forward to reading a poem with an upbeat and happy flow...keep your head up!
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Re: Self Control
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by iluvpencils on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:52:30 PM AEST
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| This is really good. I know where you're coming from...I haven't struggled with drugs myself, but similar things like S.I. It takes work, and you have to want to succeed in it, but if you put your mind to it, you'll see that everything can turn itself around. Everything will turn out ok. |
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Re: Self Control
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by InsertRandomPseudonym on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:40:53 PM AEST
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| Pretty good, some grammatical errors, but very emotional. Drugs are so fun when they're just recreational, but then it gets to be a problem and you end up, like you said, having deep emotional problems. |
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