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Another Lonley Night
Contributed by
JustxAxDream
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It’s another lonely night
I’m counting the stars in the sky
I’m wishing on everyone that I see
Each night I long for your tough
To just see you smiling face
But I know that your smile is not meant for me
It never was and never will be
In my one last gasping breath I say the name that’s
Been on the tip of my tong for what feels like forever
So how does it feel?
Knowing that you’re the reason for my blood and tears?
Knowing that you’re the cause of my trembling fears?
Now how does it feel?
Knowing that you’ve kept me up all night wishing for you
That I don’t sleep for fears of dreaming of you again
But how I won’t feel this knife you hold to my heart
Slice deep into me and make me bleed
Don’t look back at what you’ve done to me
I just don’t want you to see
This is my last lonely night
This is my last drop of blood shed for you
That falling star was the last one I wished on
But now like the dreams I once had of you
It’s gone
Copyright ©
JustxAxDream
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2005-03-26 21:33:18]
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Re: Another Lonley Night
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by blue_angel on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:56:11 PM AEST
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ooo me likey! this is an amazing piece of poetry i can totally relate... my bf just broke up wit me... i rilly like this one i think this is my favorite................
...........oO*jennie*Oo............... |
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Re: Another Lonley Night
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by PeaceLovHppnes on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:29:35 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem...I could relate very well ..it feels like the story of my life. I can't wait for my last lonley night...keep it up!
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Re: Another Lonley Night
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:36:15 AM AEST
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Oh my God, if someone is causing u this much pain walk away from them. Find your own inner peace and leave this person to their own demise.
God help u to endure.
luv, huggs, much prayer,
emy |
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Re: Another Lonley Night
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by Kie on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:50:54 PM AEST
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I think you did a fine job expressing how you feel in this poem.
Other than some spelling errors I could find nothing wrong with it.
I wish there were words to make nights not so lonely but only time will help the pain go away.
May you find a new dream and one that will bring back smiles and the good things in life.
Kie |
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