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I wish that I were with you
Contributed by
Avernus
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I lay here in my bed
Thoughts of you go through my head
I think of you and you smile
Your laugh your face and all the while
I wish that I were with you
I can't believe how much I miss
The feel of your lips as we kiss
The warmth of your body next to mine
This one thought with me the whole time
I wish that I were with you
Gazing deep into your eyes
Beautiful like the night sky
Running fingers through your hair
Oh how I want to be there
I wish that I were with you
Caressing you soft smooth skin
Thoughts of you are within
My heart and soul I keep them there
To be without you I can't bare
I wish that I were with you
Copyright ©
Avernus
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2005-03-26 20:34:21]
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Re: I wish that I were with you
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by PeaceLovHppnes on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:31:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write..you explain how I feel to the T...keep it up ..i look forward to reading more!
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Re: I wish that I were with you
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by ButchCorpuz on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:23:48 PM AEST
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Nice poem! Very good rhyming scheme.
Keep it up!
-Butch |
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Re: I wish that I were with you
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by jmpy84 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:35:25 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: I wish that I were with you
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:19:18 AM AEST
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A wonderful, beautiful and well expressed poem. A heart warming and pleasant piece of poetry so well portrayed.
Hugs,
Sue |
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