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I Don't Need you
Contributed by
caopotter
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:19:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The gentle rumblings of your voice
used to make me smile.
A bad day just faded away
when you were there beside me.
But I don't need you,
you need me.
While talking to me you started to smile,
your eyes lit up
like a million sparklers dancing in the dark.
Yeah,
but I don't need you.
I'm fine on my own.
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2005-03-26 20:19:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Don't Need you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avernus on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:23:57 PM AEST (User
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Not bad for a quickie... you can tell though that you didn't spend to much time. But no one ever said that was a bad thing A lot of people can't write that good when they do take the time so I have to give you props |
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