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Don't
Contributed by
JustxAxDream
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don’t stop don’t care
Makes no difference to me
Don’t comfort don’t share
No eyes bother to see
Don’t scream don’t cry
I can’t comfort you now
The act is over the curtains now fall
Its time to take you last bow
You heart can shatter your soul can bleed
But no one will care
Your eyes can leak and spill your tears
But no one will other to care
Don’t stop don’t care
Makes no difference to me
Don’t comfort don’t share
No eyes bother to see
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2005-03-26 20:02:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don't
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:34:16 PM AEST (User
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i like it... it reminds me of me lol... very well written and sadly true... i like this stanza:
Don’t scream don’t cry
I can’t comfort you now
The act is over the curtains now fall
Its time to take you last bow
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