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A Place
Contributed by
Avernus
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:51:15 PM in AEST
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There is a place that I fear
A place that I won't go near
But people push so I'm headed
Towards a place for me is dreaded
A place I would rather not be
A place most call reality
But whats real for some not for others
They see black while I see colors
What is real and whats not there
I do not know nor do I care
I just want to be left alone
In the world that I call home
The place in my brain I go to think
When life has me on the brink
I go and it's calm and peacful
I don't have to worry about other people
It's a place where I can just be me
A place I am truely free
A place far from reality
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Avernus
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2005-03-26 19:51:15]
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Re: A Place
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by thepizzaguy on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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| I liked you poem, mostly because I can relate to it. I have a poem much like this one, its a bit more sad though. If you have the time, check it out, its called "Where the Gravel Meets the Grass." Good writing. |
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Re: A Place
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:03:09 PM AEST
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| Ah..... this took me back into FFXI. That game sucked me in like no other game had, and that's saying something. I logged 55 days into that game last summer... craziness. Eventually though, I had to quit; mainly to better myself as a human being and not live in a simulation. I understand this poem completely however, and I still become enveloped in a weekly rental once in awhile. I don't know if your "place" lies in gaming, but I'm glad that you have somewhere to unwind from this bipolar world. |
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Re: A Place
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by topcatcrowther on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 07:27:40 AM AEST
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| Kick ass peom, I don't have my own place, i just pretend and change reality to fit me, if u understand lol. |
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