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Almost wonder
Contributed by
Sk8ergrl_911
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain,
The wind,
The sky,
I can't escape from thoughts of you,
I can't forget your face,
A song,
I poem,
A wonderful piece of art,
It's just you,
The wonderful masterpiece painted in my heart,
How will I erase such a wonderful thing from my thoughts.
You taunt me,
Every breath I spend thinking of you,
This torture,
it's almost.....wonder.
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2005-03-26 18:58:54]
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Re: Almost wonder
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:22:54 PM AEST
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You taunt me--this line said it all.
A lost love is always there in every face in everything and every place.
I think the line I poem you must have ment A poem
You did a good job.
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Re: Almost wonder
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:33:47 PM AEST
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Thank you very much
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Re: Almost wonder
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:32:42 PM AEST
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| woooooooowwww!! really liked this piece so simple in structure yet so effective!!! you should be really proud of this piece... i can totally relate to this poem |
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Re: Almost wonder
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by sarankrish on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:06:43 AM AEST
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| Good. Keep it up and do more poems. |
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