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Did God Forget Claire?
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:55:26 PM in AEST
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5:55 PM
3/25/05
I spend my time wondering and waiting
Hoping to find a reason for waking
Now I loose all of my faith
I can't come close to finding a place.
"Dear God,
My Name is Claire and can you see me?
Have you been listening to my prayers?
When are you going to rescue me
So many days I on my own
With none this isn't fair
Is it part of your great plane
Is there something better?"
In my heart there is a aching
That cuts so deep down in to my soul
How come my life has to be this way?
When will all of this loneliness fade?
The skies are gray every day.
"Dear God,
I'm feeling left out
Staring at the objects in my room
Waiting for a sign something so I know you care
Hours descend, minuets fly, the days turn to years
Did you forget about me, Claire?"
I look at the stars above my head
Night time's to short for my exploring mind
Sunrise will be up very soon
Another morning that I dread.
© Care Strom
Copyright ©
KishaLovesCare126
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2005-03-26 17:55:26]
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Re: Did God Forget Claire?
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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Beautifully written just dripping with emotion.
I think I liked the middle stanza the best, but
it was all good... its good to see you back at
YPDC. :)
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Re: Did God Forget Claire?
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:57:15 AM AEST
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Kishlovescare126
Hey its okey to question God.He alows that.
He hasn't forgotten you.
Rather than pray He come to you,
pray He lead you to where he really is,after all he started only One church not the thousands that call themselves Christion.
Good write.
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Re: Did God Forget Claire?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:31:16 PM AEST
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| This is good, i mean goooood, i like it, i like what you've done with the ryhme :) nice one! |
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