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With Someone Else

Contributed by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



3/25/05
4:08 AM

Today you told me you found someone
I didn't want to believe it
It shouldn't be true
Some where inside I felt a tear
It's ripping, ripping
Damaging my heart.

Don't you see I'm here?
So close to you I can touch your hand
Why did you have unlove me?
When can we go back honey
To the way it use to be?
I miss you today, tonight in my dreams.

Watching the sunset over the hill
I wonder where you are
If your even far
I'd take the car to find you
But, I already know where your at
So I sit praying someday you'll come back.

Candle light glows on the walls
Seeing your face in the flame
Brings back heartfelt memories of us
No sleep just the tears falling every night
Please, please just look back on what we could of had someday
I stop to glance in to your eyes you use to be mine.

You want to know something
Want to know the worst kind of pain
Pain so unforgiving it drives me insane
Lives inside my heart for eternity
Still today I still want you to come walk through that door
Tell me you want me back, say your words -- the truth
I sigh lowering my head to the floor your gone with someone else.

© Care Strom




Copyright © KishaLovesCare126 ... [ 2005-03-26 17:43:09]
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Re: With Someone Else (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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Strong and emotional. Beautiful write.




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