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I Will
Contributed by
daniel
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Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
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oh I've had enuff of this world
I've done all I can do to live
I could use some help from you
and I will come around again
it used to be all easy
it used to be given away
now nothing is for free
costing me more every day
more problems than before
all I don't want and more
sneaking its way inside
pulling sucking me dry
it used to be all cleaner
it used to be all good
now its all dirtied up
nothing is how it should
days with cloud in air
rain pours down unfair
how it ruins me again
oh what can I do then
I'm moving to a different world...
I hope to see you there...
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daniel
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2002-12-19 10:40:00]
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Re: I Will
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by TheSpiritx on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:33:14 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem. I like the message you convey and your method to express it. Good job. |
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Re: I Will
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:20:26 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem, full of emotion and very good expressions.
bis spater
¤°*•· Ali ·•*°¤ |
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Re: I Will
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:32:28 PM AEST
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Danny, this is so beautiful!! :) You rock!
Even better the second time 'round!.... :)
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Re: I Will
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:30:19 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one alot danialo...it has a good message behind it and it definately says "need to get out of here" just member what i told you bout followin your heart...peace!...
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