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Poem 1.
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:53:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I have met a lady upon the net
And though its true we have not “met”
There was something there, I must say
From the first second, that very day
Well I’ve been hurt, back in the past
And back then I said, it was the last
So like a fool, I closed the door
And then I went to chat no more
Emails arrived, and went without reply
I read and filed, this fool am I
And then one day, my mood was right
I went to chat, to this angel so bright
We spoke for hours, and even more
Someone now had, a foot in the door
I told myself, on the net you cant fall
To guard against, letting down my walls
But then it happened, something sparked
And within my heart, you made your mark
This beautiful angel, to whom I spoke
Had just managed to deal, that fatal stroke
She is a beauty, both in and out
So now I say to all, no, wait I’ll shout
“she is a lady, so fair and true
and yes …. I do love you”
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2005-03-26 07:53:57]
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Kie on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:01:20 AM AEST
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Awww, this was so sweet and romantic.
One beautiful poem.
Kie |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:55:19 AM AEST
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A beauty of a writting here's 2 love . . .
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Re: Poem 1.
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:53:21 AM AEST
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Mick, this was such a sad yet beautiful write.
Good poem as always.
Jane |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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Well done my friend, I understand what your talking about, good luck to you and her.
The Phantom |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:37:36 PM AEST
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So beautiful, that was such a moving poem Mick,lovely,
pix xx |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:21:33 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! Aint love grand! Much peace to you. |
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:59:18 PM AEST
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Awesome stuff Mick... wow two poems in the
space of one week I feel so spoiled lol. I wish
you and this amazing lady the best of luck.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:02:09 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! I wish you two the best!! |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Sensommar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:15:52 PM AEST
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| A very sweet and tender lovepoem Good luck to both of you With love Pia |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:22:29 AM AEST
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You know ... I wouldn't have thought it possible ... I am revising that point of view on an almost daily occurance. Congrats Mick. Great way to delve into what you are feeling.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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| Woo Hoo Mick's in love. Good luck to ya Mick. CONGRATS!!!!!!! *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:15:03 PM AEST
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I no longer go to chat rooms.. I have not in 2 years.. but I happened to have met the most wonderful man .. and he is my friend to this day.. to our family as well.. He teases me about being the older woman.. but soon he will catch up to me each year. we are only 5 mo. apart lol. I do believe this man was given to me by God..
So.. this is my chat room now.. and I love it.. my chatting poem friends..
Thank you so much Mick.. this is a very lovely and I find it quite an experience..
You sound like a very nice natural and loving human being..
Very beautiful write.. ty for posting. I hope to see more of your writes..
RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:39:01 PM AEST
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Well done my friend I am so happy for you, keep em comming.
The Phantom |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by inoc on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 06:59:58 AM AEST
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I feel sorry that I have taken so long to read this,
I wish you both a wonderful time together..
your poem is so perfect, clear and sweet.
coni |
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Re: Poem 1.
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by ek_da_poet on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:53:37 PM AEST
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| this was really good, i can see why you are the owner of this site, this poem flowed real great the wording on this was easy read, maybe i can a feedback on some of my poems if you have the time |
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