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Ain't Your Whore
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:21:43 AM in AEST
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by reaven2004 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:27:41 AM AEST
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I really love that poem. It is really deep and I can feel your anger and pain coming from it. I really like the last part "12, yeah you heard right a baby girl walkin the streets at night
but even though my list of sins is longer
my heart and soul are that much stronger
so like I said before baby, I ain't no FN whore no more!" I love how you said it made you stronger.
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:41:17 AM AEST
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| It was strong, not necessarily graphic. A shame such a thing could get modded into oblivion before it knows light. Truth is seldom pretty.. |
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:57:35 AM AEST
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A comment any way just 4 the effort . . .
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:38:32 PM AEST
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OH ! darn they removed it. I haven't run across any of your poem for awhile. I'm sure it was great. :)
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 06:32:37 AM AEST
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| oops, sorry. It isn't even that bad. But it is on http://groups.msn.com/PoetryFiends . If you really want to read it.... |
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Re: Ain't Your Whore
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 09:20:58 PM AEST
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Hey Joce, I went and read it...very powerful poem...great job! I liked the rythm and the descriptions were very vivid. You go Girl!
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