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OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:55:09 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
Remember, sports bar long ago?
Still lets my spirit, heart soar.
Tipsie, a couple wines that day.
Yeah, we'd soar our own way.
Darlin our next dance, eternity
in-luv soarin, high, free.
Our next dance in God's lite
Huggin, kissen, luvin alnite.
U freed me from inner prison
With luv, lifes circumsizum.
Never doubted our spastic luv
Dancin under endless stars above.
Our past done buried of pain.
Now let's play in holy rain.
Knew our hearts 4-ever merged
Tottally blessed by God's mighty luv.
U put the twinkle back in my shine.
Eternally thine
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-03-26 02:55:09]
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by Avernus on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:21:44 AM AEST
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| This is utterly beautiful.....beautiful |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:09:58 AM AEST
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You rock girl. This is great, Emy. I love it.
But from you who could expect anything less than the best. Ya have a way with words.
Much peace to u my friend,
Sue
PS I love the picture. It's great |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by AutomaticTLC on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:35:31 AM AEST
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| It's nice..but I don't like this line:
Huggin, kissen, luvin alnite.
I don't know why, it just sounds poorly writen and it's not really poetic enough for me.
No offense! *rates it a three* |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:19:25 PM AEST
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| another good ending emy =] |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:20:41 AM AEST
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Hey Emmy that was beautiful, as ur poems always are
XOXOXJill |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:12:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Scott |
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Re: OUR NEXT DANCE, ETERNITY
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:21:04 AM AEST
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Wonderfully touching and beautiful. "next dance, eternity" Breathtaking quote! Wonderful write. Beautiful work, keep it up.
--amanda-- |
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