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Princess Nevermore
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:22:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I always wanted to be that beautiful fairy tale bride
teering up, unable to hide my glowing pride
my daddy would walk me down the aisle,
and you would be standing there all the while,
my perfect husand to be...
the angel sent to protect over me
waiting,
anticipating,
the moment our hearts would become one
But my fairy tale dream has come undone...
This feeling of emptiness within...
is it greater then my engorgement with sin?
overflowing with such utter despair
but cannot find an ouce of happiness in there
bloated with hate and perpetual lies
though only vacancy stares out of these eyes
regret never changes, it don't fade
never will it be a due that has been paid
it's a tarnish nothing can polish away
just gets dingier each passing day
this "love" is nothing but dissapating lust
this relationship was never built on trust
we are falling through the cracks
we are far from the right track
(and I don't want to ever look back)
nothing is going to change here...
but always will you have my tears.
Who did you think I was anyway?
when you got on your knee that fated day?
when you shakily gave me that ring?
I never changed a thing...
What did you think I was gonna do?
What the F did you think I was gonna do?!
Change for you?!
Well surprise!
There is no disguise.
No princess behind these blackened eyes.
I always wanted to be that beautiful bride
unable to hide my glowing pride
my daddy would walk me down the aisle,
and you would be standing there all the while,
my perfect husand to be
the angel sent to protect over me
waiting
anticipating
the moment our hearts would become one
But my fairy tale dream has come undone...
You have raped my dreams
and now it seems
i am but a hollow shell
an empty hell
can you hear my heart beat?
because it is in retreat,
it now knows defeat.
You call me princess in a cynical, sarcastic way
but don't you see, I thought I was a princess one day
a little girl with wide eyes and an open heart
never'd guessed this little girl would be ravaged apart...
Where is my prince charming to take me away from this graveyard of dreams-dead
where is my sweet knight to fill new ones in my little princess head?
My crown lays broken on the ground beside me,
this little princess never came to be...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2005-03-26 01:22:39]
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:31:01 AM AEST
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Such sad words to tell about somthing that should be so beautiful, be patient love will find u no matter where you hide, and u will see i'ts been waiting in your heart all the while and u didn't know it . . . beautiful style u have . . .
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:38:21 AM AEST
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Wow written with such despair, I loved this
poem but it hurts me to see someone like
this. I hope everything works out and
remember that everything can change
including yourself. Keep up the writing
hopefully it will enable you to get your dark
thoughts and pain out.
*hugs*
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:28:45 AM AEST
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| Aww Jocie, this a beautifully written, emotional poem. Wonderful job! |
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 03:47:12 AM AEST
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Very sad but a masterpeice indeed.
Hang tuff my friend as luv will find a way.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 03:56:11 AM AEST
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This was such a sad sad write, I used to dream like this that love will be on my side.
I always wanted to be that beautiful fairy tale bride
teering up, unable to hide my glowing pride
my daddy would walk me down the aisle,
and you would be standing there all the while,
my perfect husand to be...
the angel sent to protect over me
waiting,
anticipating,
the moment our hearts would become one
But my fairy tale dream has come undone...
Those lines where so powerful and deep, your such an incredible writer.
Jane |
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:47:33 PM AEST
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very sad and moving, you write your emotions so well, great work hunni *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:09:43 AM AEST
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Hey u r a smart woman beautiful poem If only more women could wise up and appreciate thier beautiful selves for who they r. smart girl good writer!
XOXOXJill |
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Re: Princess Nevermore
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by freckle on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:09:05 PM AEST
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Hey Jocelyn, I can honestly say for the first time I think I have tears in my eyes...I can so relate to this. It is such a shame that life ends up like this at times...it will get better though...and I think you are a strong enough woman to pull through a'ight. Great wrapping it up in this poem....
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