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Sunrise
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ocean waves wash away all my pain
And there’s no sunshine without the rain
Cover my eyes so I am blind
Take my breath away, I don’t mind
Filled with emotion are the skies
As I watch in amazement the proverbial sunrise
A warm tear slips down my cheek
I open my mouth but cannot speak
Filled is my heart, yet empty my soul
Swallow me up, completely and whole
I have fallen so far from the tree
And I am so far from where I could be
My tears fall to the ground in silence
Then like glass they shatter in violence
For this there is no explanation
I’m running away with no destination
Following footprints that don’t exist
Wanting to turn back but I can’t resist
I won’t live on empty promises anymore
I won’t rely on you like I did before
Heading into the sunrise with a smile on my face
So much clear air, so much empty space
I forgive myself for the things I have done
Release my pain, fall into the sun…
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Re: Sunrise
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by purplestary on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:39:59 PM AEST
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| this is a great write. you have true talent. i love how you write. amazing beautiful, and expressed very well. |
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Re: Sunrise
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by enamat on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:46:19 AM AEST
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| poem is beautiful, real emotion and vivid words. very, very good. i love this kind of writing. |
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Re: Sunrise
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:50:12 PM AEST
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I found the images and expression very moving, and very well done. Excellent work, with a touch of Life to it that made it a joy to read.
Andrew |
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Re: Sunrise
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by JustxAxDream on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST
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This is amazing this one nicley writen i like the first line thats really awsome it makes you really beleive what your saying..Oh and im sorry about your boyfriend and you
XoOx - Princess Michelle - xOoX |
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Re: Sunrise
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by Jaycee on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:22:27 AM AEST
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| Sometimes I feel my heart has hardened, unable to feel anything but pain anymore, then I come across this. Simply beautiful, like... well, I won't compare, because comparisons I think of come up flat. You breathe life into mere words and shape them so we feel. Thank you for sharing. |
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