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I Miss...
Contributed by
clementine
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My heart is filled with eternal sadness.
It bleeds an endless amount of tears.
I miss my dad.
I really, really, miss my dad.
Like hundreds of dull razors slowly ripping away at my soul.
It hurts.
Everything inside of me is fractured...
irreparable...
completely destroyed.
My hands attempt to comfort my overwhelming emotions
by holding my head up as I cry on these desolate nights,
but the comfort is replaced by infernal loneliness...
It's been two months and seventeen days,
and I still grieve every moment that my eyes are open,
just as every part of me weeps as I close my eyes...
I am damaged and broken...
I am damaged and broken...
I am so very damaged.
and I am so very broken.
I love you.
With every inch that encompasses every part of me,
I love you.
Copyright ©
clementine
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2005-03-25 21:22:31]
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Re: I Miss...
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by allforyou on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:37:45 PM AEST
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I'm so incredibly sorry for your loss. Great write, you really expressed yourself well in this.
Keep looking up,
Kara |
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Re: I Miss...
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by purplestary on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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| a very emotional write. i am impressed with how well you expressed this. very sad. i am sorry that you must go through this. |
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Re: I Miss...
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:24:55 PM AEST
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| It's such a sad poem, but I think it's really good. Sad poems are sometimes the most well written, as in this case. I really like it. |
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