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none as yet, any suggestions ?
Contributed by
ravensfire
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 06:26:14 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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My eyelids tremble with desire I am stricken by her loves flame, I struggle to win this thing called love I want to win loves game. I long to see the color of her dreams to walk in your souls land, I long to feel the passionate touch of her hand. Our love can become immortal can you take a chance?, Become one with me a life of romance.
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2005-03-25 18:26:14]
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Re: none as yet, any suggestions ?
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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Very beautifull/
a masterpeice/
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: none as yet, any suggestions ?
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:33:39 PM AEST
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| That was sooooo beautiful! Great write. The Longing might be a cool title. Much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: none as yet, any suggestions ?
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:33:41 AM AEST
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awwww now thats damn sweet and beautiful.
love and romance.......awsome. |
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