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Nothingness
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 05:13:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Stuck in this rut of half living
a tire in mud
spinning
spinning
never going anywhere.
Words crumbling fast
boulders of nothingness
like silent raindrops, fall.
Still numb inside
no feeling but cold
at the tips if my fingers
waiting for something to happen,
looking in all directions
but still,
nothingness.
Copyright ©
Nardo
... [
2005-03-25 17:13:13]
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Re: Nothingness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 05:40:46 PM AEST
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| you are excellent at conveying meaning in all forms. an enjoyment to read because i have been there myself, and i see a mud pit ahead of me... as i said in a comment just a minute ago....what isnt there can be filled, while whats there can only be taken away. |
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Re: Nothingness
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:29:38 AM AEST
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| Short yet conveys the message well. I lvoe a short poem if it is done right and i liked yours. thank you for the read. |
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Re: Nothingness
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by jennihi123 on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 03:29:49 AM AEST
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| i really liked this poem. you have put alot of feeling into it. |
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