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My Sweet Lover's Song
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Gaze into your eyes
As you entertain my fantasies;
Our fingers, bodies, entwined,
Oh, how you give me such fantasies...
I cannot believe I've found you,
The Romeo to my Juliet,
We fell in love so fast,
so deeply
so sweetly...
I said those words
And I'll say them again,
To forever and on,
Like a sweet lover's song...
My hands so soft,
Tracing the shape of your lips,
Longing to feel your essence
Tingling at my fingertips...
I cannot believe I've found you,
The Jack to my Sally.
Love came so quickly,
so softly,
so sweetly...
I said those words
And I'll say them again,
To forever and on,
Like a sweet lover's song...
Can you see inside me?
Taste my hopes, and my dreams?
The sweetness of us together,
holding hands and touching souls...
I said those words
And I'll say them again,
To forever and on,
My sweet lover's song...
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Re: My Sweet Lover's Song
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by Adrianna on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 07:07:48 PM AEST
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| Really like your wording. Makes me think of my finance! |
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Re: My Sweet Lover's Song
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:29:02 PM AEST
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| This is good, i mean goooood, i like it, i like what you've done with the ryhme :) nice one! |
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