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Bleeding For You
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:51:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Am I just another girl,
Who's upon you list?
Don't think that I'm proud,
Of the scars on my wrist.
Did you take to heart,
The words that I wrote?
Have you even realized,
The burns on my throat?
Am I just another girl,
That you'll never respect?
Would your heart break in two,
If you saw me inject?
Did you mumble a lie,
When you kissed my mouth?
Will the pain go away,
If I gas myself?
Am I just another girl,
You once again used?
Were you scared when you heard,
About the pills I abused?
Did you play with my heart,
Did you love me at all?
Would you scream out my name,
If you witnessed me fall?
Am I just another girl,
Whos life you'll crush?
Should I let the bullet fly,
And recieve deaths touch?
Did you really love me,
Or has your heart lied?
You see me gasping for breath,
I'm drowning inside.
Does it worry you about,
The blood I've spilt?
When you read this poem,
Do you feel any guilt?
Of all suicide thoughts,
I have done or will do.
It just goes to show,
Im bleeding for you.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-03-25 11:51:28]
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Re: Bleeding For You
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:57:35 AM AEST
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deep and well expressed
pix xx |
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Re: Bleeding For You
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:45:03 PM AEST
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| i agree. it seems to me that this guy isn't worth ur care, but I don't suppose i really know. kepp it up! |
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Re: Bleeding For You
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by allforyou on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:16:33 PM AEST
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Wow...that one made my make-up run. Once again impressed by your writing. You have a great talent.
--Kara |
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Re: Bleeding For You
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by fredsmith on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:47:38 PM AEST
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sad yet awsum
you hav so much talent in you
i know how u feel except it was a grl who broke me
we should chat more cause we hav alot in comun
if u eva need sum1 2 tlk 2 im here lolz
well anywayz awsum poem 5/5 if u eva hav time u should come hav a look at sum of myn like Suicidal Thoughts or Death From Above etc
From Fred xxx |
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