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The Hurt Deepens
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:06:55 AM in AEST
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My undying hurt deepens,
As my love for you sweetens,
Along with love comes the pain,
As with the sunshine comes the clouds & rain.
Love brings many mixed emotions,
Each shown with utter devotion,
I can’t lie loving you hurts so much,
But I’d never be without your touch.
My heart is scarred from the past years,
My eyes remember crying all those tears,
My soul remembers being torn in two,
My blood remembers running so cold & blue.
Why does love have to hurt?
Is kisses you softly then throws you in the dirt,
Your heart is left vulnerable in someone’s care,
Laying so exposed leaving itself bare.
As I fall deeper in love the pain grows,
I try not to let it but through me it shows,
There is only YOU who can break my heart,
Only you who can tear my world apart.
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pixie
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2005-03-25 11:06:55]
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:20:30 AM AEST
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WOW! This is an awsome write. I feel as if you looked into my vortex of a mind and wrote down how I feel from time to time. This one really hit home and was so very well written. Keep up these awsome writes.
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:22:31 AM AEST
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| so true... great write. |
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:24:58 AM AEST
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LOVE HURT'S CAUSE WE LET IT HURT,
AND WE LET IT HURT WHEN WE BECOME
SLAVES 2 IT, A BEAUTIFUL WRITE PIXIE
EVN MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN LOVE IT SELF
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:11:03 PM AEST
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Cheri pixie... this is a genuine look within yourself and revealing so much anguish... Love does hurt, very much.. We think we cannot bear it any longer, the relentless pain... But love has a sweet side, and will see through it all. I am so sorry that you are going through this, cheri amie... I can truly relate ot this, douce pixie.. and I think others can too. The bittersweetness that is love can be very overwhelming... we let it control us, then we get hurt... It is the process of it. Fall in love, get hurt, fall in love again... etc. Hoping all will get better for you, sweetheart!! Flawless piece! All my love!! Forever,
Your friend,
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:30:22 PM AEST
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Pix, you know exactly what to say at just the right time. I definately agree, love does indeed hurt. We fall quicker than we can pick ourselves back up. It's a tendency we all have, usally Women a bit more. The thing is though, we can't prevent things from happening. You ever been to a point where you knew you couldn't handle a relationship, yet you did it anyways? Then it didn't work out and you beat yourself up for allowing yourself to do so? Well that is fate. It's like a never ending ride at an amusment park. You get a thrill from it, though at the same time, when you ride it too much you become physically ill.It's something we have no control of.Your automaticlly drawn to the person that shows you even the slightest bit of attention. It's ok, don't feel bad, i'm the same way. I don't know how much sense i'm making..but eh. I tried!! Great write as always. Much love and many *Hugs*
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Re: The Hurt Deepens
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:52:10 PM AEST
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Krissie, you still have it and i doubt you will ever lose it.
Your talents as a poet grow and grows each day making you into a talent to be reckoned with.
Amazing write sweetie.
Jane |
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