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MY EYES, YOUR EYES
Contributed by
Freakchild910
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:32:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The eyes of a wolf
looking at his blood
with a cut paw
it gushes like a flood
The eyes of a spider
looking at his web
as he spinned it carefully
he also said
As i look through my eyes
i see there before
is the wolf looking down
at the blood on the floor
i see the same
as what he can see
we are not different
you and me
We have different bodies
strange ways of life
with the cuts and the blood
from a long, sharp knife
But the wolf replied
as he said in his mind
I can not see you
but we are not different
as i can see your
neatly spinned web
from my eyes
he calmly said
As they said that they both replied
My Eyes your eyes we are both the same
Freakchild xxxxxx
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2005-03-25 10:32:17]
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Re: MY EYES, YOUR EYES
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:58:41 AM AEST
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good write liked this alot
pix xx |
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Re: MY EYES, YOUR EYES
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:06:08 PM AEST
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| very well written! good analagies. 5 star |
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