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'think i'm in luv'
Contributed by
abhay
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:55:35 AM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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with all my love i try to compose for u,
with all the truth i am running through,
may u live with smiling face forever ,
but u leaft a person for ever,
u leave me here to find what?
but i know now what is love..............
Copyright ©
abhay
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2005-03-25 03:55:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 'think i'm in luv'
(User Rating: 1 ) by veenu on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:03:55 AM AEST (User
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its so very small.....................................................................
cant u write more for ur love,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: 'think i'm in luv'
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kuro_Mirai on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:28:23 AM AEST (User
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It's a nice poem, but maybe a little short. |
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