|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Take It Back
Contributed by
TinkerHell
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:32:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
Take back all your kisses,
the ones that you gave
too many reminisces
that I'd rather not save.
Take back every smile,
the ones that you fed
decieved me awhile
and my heart you had led.
Take back the times you held my hand,
I guess they didn't mean a thing.
While I wrote your name upon the sand,
you made it clear that I was only a fling.
So please take it all back...
forget what we could have had
The only thing you didn't lack...
was the ability to make me sad.
Copyright ©
TinkerHell
... [
2005-03-25 01:32:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Take It Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:47:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow! Why are there no comments?? This is absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job. Expressed so well. I felt your pain through the entire poem. Wonderful job. Much love.
P.s. I LOVE your name. So unqiue. Very beautiful
~Alucia~ |
|
|
Re: Take It Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:43:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Geez, Tink - this is potent... and sadly, relatable.
"Take it back" --- it's an intriguing thought. I'll probably spend half the day wonder if it were possible... if I'd want it so. Hmmmm.... I honestly can't answer that at the moment.
If nothing else - at least you can find some comfort in knowing a great poem came of the memories. : )
Keep writing-
~Snemmy~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
