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I Wont Save You! I Can't Save You!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:14:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't just look away.
Cus the hate is burned into my mind.
I can't fell anything.
Cause the hate has left me dead inside.
There's a fine line
Between love and hate.
That we cross at least once
Of every damned day.
And while you're saying that you love me
You still push me away.
You tie me at the wrists
So that you can't be saved.
Can't save you.
You never wanted me to.
Can't save you now. i can't just look away.
Cause the hate is burned into my mind.
I can't feel anything
Cause the hate has left me dead inside.
There's a line between this love and hate.
That i've drawn, that you've crossed and now you can't
Be saved.
If all you wanted was to die
Then i won't stop you today.
Cause i know your game.
I know you'll never change.
Can't save you. you never wanted me to.
Can't save you now.
We've tried and failed
So many times.
And i'd try for you again but i've drawn that line.
you've lied too many damn times.
And i'd save your life again
But you've crossed the line and died.
You crossed the line.
But you'll never cross me now
Cause i won't save you.
You never wanted me to
And i played the role for too long.
No i won't save your hopeless life.
No. no one can
Save you.
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MajesticPoet
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2005-03-24 21:14:02]
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Re: I Wont Save You! I Can't Save You!
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:34:26 PM AEST
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| Yea, I like it. Pretty nifty. |
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Re: I Wont Save You! I Can't Save You!
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by TheSpiritx on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:50:33 PM AEST
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I know how you're feeling, but I am on the other side of this.
I have bouts of depression that I struggle with. I also can't bring myself to be close to other people. Intimacy and emotions make me nervous and rather frightened, so I avoid them both.
I have always wanted someone there for me, but I can't give anything back in any relationship I've had, which makes both sides of the relationship feel bad. My girlfriend would always think I was dragging her along on my personal emotional rollercoaster and I felt bad because I wanted so badly to express myself and to love, but I couldn't.
A lot of people are not like me. Many of them play games like that intentionally. Just remember that some of us don't mean to. I just hope that the people who can't help it do their best to treat others with the respect they deserve, doing whatever they have to in order to accomplish that.
I'd like for you to read my short story called The Void, too. Linked here [www.your-poetry.com]. It might give you the view from the other side of the coin. |
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