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The Blueprints: Empty shell.

Contributed by ForeverAndADay on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Here are the blueprints for a human being;
Two glasses, rounded, used to see.
Not having anything to do with what the vessel chooses to see.
Capabilities are limited...
Sometimes the glass breaks...
We cannot be held responsible for the damages.

Behind the glass is a high tech machine.
Stores memories with amazing accuracy.
Tends to hold damagable stuff in the back.
Things it feels the vessel should no longer see.
This machine is used to think.
To gather information for decision making.
Incredible as it is it can also be used to create.
But it has a tendancy to set it's own limitations.
Sometimes it backfires, and it will eventually shut down.
It may be broken even before it's set up.
Oh well, that's life...and it isn't our problem.

Below this incredible piece of machine is a vessel of great manueverability.
Sit behind the controls and watch it's speed.
May take several years before it get's on.
But we're almost 40 percent positive you'll like what you see.

In these blueprints you will find the perfect human being (somewhere.)
And if it's looks your concerned over, don't sweat it.
We'll send you an empty vessel free.
Granted you won't get the rest until later.
But you'll find it worth it...you'll see.

(Take away what makes a person human and all you have is an empty shell. Does the shape of the vessel really matter?)

You can find these blueprints anywhere you look.
Feel free to make comments.
We're always looking for new ideas.
And ways to better mankind.

Copyright © ForeverAndADay ... [ 2005-03-24 18:18:10]
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