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Breathing Death
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Breathing Death
Peering down an endless hole
Nothing but a broken soul
Watching it slowly
Break
As death it breaths
And darkness slowly grieves
For I have nothing left to
Take
Shuddered by the hurt
While destroying my life of dirt
My life drowning in an endless
Lake
Cold as the hand touches
Warm as the tide rushes
For I am overtaken for my own
Sake
My life being saved
By one I craved
I love you and to you I must
Thank
...
You my angel
...
For taking
My death
In your cradle
...
Of another breath
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-24 17:52:18]
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Re: Breathing Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:08:22 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem clark. very well written indeed. not crap at all. have a nice writing break =] |
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Re: Breathing Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:28:23 AM AEST
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This poem gave me the chills. Very well done. I enjoyed this greatly. Much love.
~Alucia~ |
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