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so unseen
Contributed by
treasure
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My sorrows fall
upon deaf ears
on my knees I crawl
entrapped by fears
chained to shadows
when darkness comes
life runs shallow
there is no sun
voiceless scream
bloody heart
so unseen
I fall apart
eyes so blind
die alone
no peace to find
no way home
Copyright ©
treasure
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2005-03-24 16:20:25]
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Re: so unseen
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by Dark_Oleander on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:05:52 PM AEST
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It be good....It be real good.
I like the way you ended it...with a sharp kind of cut....like the end, thats it |
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Re: so unseen
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:41:48 PM AEST
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wow, do i know how THAT feels. good write!
~T |
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Re: so unseen
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:42:09 PM AEST
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So sad but well written.
faith, hope, joy, luv, peace,
emy |
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