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The Paradox
Contributed by
Urizen
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:27:31 AM in AEST
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She speaks of the sea,
I watch her,
A shaken belief,
A doctrine,
A certain feeling of elation and relief.
I sit and gaze,
This ocean of faces,
This new born magnifing hate,
This empty life,
We were born too early but years too late,
Slowly we keep on moving,
To the shelter of the grave,
We await the time of misgivings,
We take and divide our eternal fate,
A careless word,
Unspoken, unheard,
Repent and repel this forsaken act of love and kindness,
We are all the same,
After all we are flesh and bones,
Sinews tied to rolls of D.N.A
A net of souls,
A gathering,
We are at the start of time,
Infinate, wisdom and magic
A departure.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-03-24 11:27:31]
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Re: The Paradox
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:55:05 AM AEST
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Re: The Paradox
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:57:27 PM AEST
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I like this, very creative.
I love this part:
"We were born too early but years too late,
Slowly we keep on moving,
To the shelter of the grave,
We await the time of misgivings,
We take and divide our eternal fate,
A careless word,
Unspoken, unheard,
Repent and repel this forsaken act of love and kindness,"
Great write, you have some good words.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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