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Incidental Death
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:09:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Dear World:
i want to die.
It's cliche...
It's even dull.
But i do.
i am sorry, world,
For the grief i've brought.
i am sorry, too,
For the pain i've wrought.
i so desperately want to die.
But i am too weak
To kill myself...
So i am just waiting
For that one random,
Lucky chance roll
of the dice...
In the game of life.
Please help me, world,
Help me to die.
i ask the drivers to be wreckless...
And the builders to be careless...
i ask those with guns to play with them.
And...
i take risks.
Risks like stepping out
Onto the road
Without looking...
i do this because i am a failure.
i have failed at life. i'm sorry.
i have failed at being...
A good son... i'm sorry.
A good lover... i'm sorry.
A good leader... i'm sorry.
A good person. i'm sorry.
i have failed at life... i'm sorry.
i have even failed at suicide.
So i wait...
For someone to help me...
With my incidental death.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
... [
2005-03-24 11:09:56]
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Re: Incidental Death
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:03:08 PM AEST
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Look, I hate to break it to you, but you are not a faliure.
A faliure doesn't write poems like this, a faliure won't know their mistakes, and a faliure won't care even if thy did know them.
Please look after yourself.
If you need to talk, I'm just a PM away.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Incidental Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 05:17:38 PM AEST
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I agree. Failures would never know
their own mistakes or write poetry or
stories. Although this is a good write.
There's great expression and detail
in here.
If you ever want to talk you can just
send me a private message and
ask for my e-mail. *hugs*
~Ravon~ |
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