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Step
Contributed by
sonic_phoenix
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:25:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Taking two steps back to go once foward
confusion is my only reward
are you with me or not?
Finding absolition in desolation
breaking all the laws of creation
is any of it fair?
my heart I lay bare
guarded in a dragon's firey lair
why can't I be free?
dying to be caught
this the truth that we sought
what is death any way?
the endless night
broken memories of might
all ending in a kiss
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2005-03-24 08:25:16]
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Re: Step
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:29:49 AM AEST
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great write, it flows really well....and you were really descriptive...i loved it!
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Re: Step
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by caramelskyair on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:32:34 AM AEST
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i could feel the emotion.
really good poem. |
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Re: Step
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:54:37 AM AEST
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what a great peice of writing, this was just brilliantly writen.
Nice job on the poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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