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Fuel of Me
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:11:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This anger in me, is the bird that's not free
And the rest is all butter and cheese
I try to show smiles, that are stretched upon miles
but roadkill's a lonely disease
Tick Tock Take Time
I'll never see Hell, but to her i will tell
The weight of every tear falling
The summer may see, clouds chasing me
Then Friday may finally come calling
Tick Tock Take Time
I'm bored with my dust, love is distrust
My Monday is made up of mourning
And if you must, strangle my trust
Be it so that it feels boring
Tick Tock Take Time
Fuel of Me
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Re: Fuel of Me
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by b_rand on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:56:44 AM AEST
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| this is rather unique. keep writing! |
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Re: Fuel of Me
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by reflections on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:17:56 PM AEST
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This is good. I'm glad I stopped by. Will call again. If the rest stand up to this one, i'll have a regular spot to brouse. Fantastic way of getting your point across. More!
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Re: Fuel of Me
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by electrique_poet on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:58:09 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this write, it is indeed unique and expressive, good job on this one
... in words electrique |
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Re: Fuel of Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:11:37 PM AEST
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