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Tainted (The Forbidden)
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 07:40:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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*Through your desperate eyes I see a blazing fire
And in you, your heart is my only desire
*I ache for but a single embrace, the slightest touch
I ache for all of that too, though it seems too much
*But my sweet, I long from the depths of a pure intented soul
What do you want from me , I'm nothing more than a fool?
*Just one kiss, a simple taste, and I forever ask no more
Then a kiss it shall be, hidden by closed door
*But with deception, secrets breed and fester sins, lies
They say though, this type of love is something we should hide, despise
*Love is but a word, despise not what can only be written down
Well, be it but a word, in it with you, still I shall drown!
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Rxqueen
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2005-03-24 07:40:45]
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:28:12 AM AEST
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Wow!!! You two did an incredible job on this, im shocked you two are writing together but you guys rocked together.
I love the picture it just brightens the whole poem to a whole new level.
jane |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by Kie on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:22:52 AM AEST
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I must agree the collaboration was very impressive.
Great title as well. Hopefully we'll see more of these as a duo.
Kie |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:08:51 PM AEST
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WOW Great job you two!
I love the format...very original! |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:28:17 PM AEST
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Fascinating tale of mystery and dark in between the lines romance, done with taste. .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by allymp on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:21:44 PM AEST
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this is wonderful...i absolutely LOVED it
great job |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:52:02 PM AEST
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Woah..I love this, you guys.
You two write really well together. Very impressed.
Hopefully, more are coming?
Great write, both of you.
*hugs tons* Phil xxx |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:54:46 PM AEST
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LOVE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, thank you so much for sharing this with us! Beautiful work of art, you two! Excellent. Absolutely flawless! Do write another, I would love to read it! All my love. Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy! *still in awe!* |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:05:27 PM AEST
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Working with another talent on site was rewarding for me ... it appears to have been beneficial for the both of you as well. A wonderful read and impressive imagery. Well done, and expertly brought together.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:15:52 AM AEST
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good poem there rather short, but still
beautifully put together. Yeah very good I
enjoyed it muchly.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by white_tiger on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:18:10 AM AEST
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that is a really great poem, i loved the fact that it was from two viewpoints. thanx 4 commenting on my poem and im sorry if ur going through a really hard marriage now....hope everything gets better!!!
keep smiling
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Re: Tainted (The Forbidden)
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:16:54 PM AEST
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| you and amy are impressive together. very well done indeed. |
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