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i dont belong here
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:05:35 AM in AEST
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painful reminders linger around my caffeinated existence.
that is not an existence at all.
I'm dying here,
This world was never meant for me.
sometimes i feel so unattached
ill be in a crowded room
and i will just stop and whisper
i am alone....
I feel like such a loser, I could pull strings of my sorrow's
From every aching joint in my body.
forming together a gossamer web of regrets that would say,
"I'm sorry, but I just don't like you that way."
If I were smart, each breath would be taken slowly,
for the weight of loneliness slowly crushes my chest
But I'm swallowing air as quickly as I swallow the
caffeinated liquid from the bottle at my lips
drowning in a world that isen't mine
i pass from mind, as i pass from sight
giving up on the happiness i was promised to find
just a shadow in a crowded room
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Re: i dont belong here
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by inoc on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:46:50 AM AEST
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An awsome write...
I liked how you worded...from every aching joint in my body...
forming together a gossamer web of regrets that would say...
I'm sorry, but I just don't like you that way...
I too feel like that sometimes....regrets are tiring..
that last line was so final...hope you will find happiness with other shadows!~
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Re: i dont belong here
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:21:30 PM AEST
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I only ever regret the things I never said or done. Some things must be avoided to regret, whilst others must be done to regret them . . .
Saying that - its only my perspective. Here's hoping you find something that causes you to write away from these feelings.
Keep writing, SM. |
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