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Why won't it end?

Contributed by mysterious on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:37:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What do you mean you couldn't do anything, the flame still burns within,
It burns so much that you don't realise, what kind of state your putting me in,
You see my love grows stronger everyday, everytime I see you,
But you have gotten over it, and I keep telling myself I want to too,
Stories I hear if there true or not, cuts me so deep it hurts,
Because I know your with other girls, it backfires on me, its just like a curse,
I see the looks that people give me, like they're sick of hearing the same old story,
But they can't see, your still breaking my heart, to them its just my misery,
Day after day, your moving on, but my heart won't let it go,
Your on my mind, it just won't pass, and I keep telling myself no,
You only JUST want to be friends, but the thing is you avoid me,
What do you want me to do, stand back and let it mend?
I told you my feelings were gone, I guess I ended up lieing,
It ties me down to the ground, but I don't want this, you see I really am trying!
But I've given in to the war I'm fighting, of love, friendship and trust,
But this whole poem is full of feeling, so how can I live with JUST!

Copyright © mysterious ... [ 2005-03-24 03:37:29]
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Re: Why won't it end? (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottenone_iam on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:56:55 PM AEST
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WOW. i feel the same exact way about a guy that i met a year ago and i havent seen him in a year, and i am so depressed cuz he only wants to be my friend and i know i really really loved him, i mean i hate loveing him, i dont like it cuz it tears me up inside, i dont know when i will see him next but i hope sometime soon and if you ever need anyone to talk to you can email me at sexy_hula_gurl2007@hotmail.com. or if you have msn you can add me.

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