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Light my Ciggarette
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:57:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You
a cigarette burn
jolting me back to reality
seering my nerves
but soon to be a scar
you will fade
I will heal
"I know I am too good for you, but will never be good enough for anyone else"
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2005-03-24 02:57:27]
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Re: Light my Ciggarette
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:54:12 AM AEST
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| Ouch! Hope you're okay Jocie. Cute, and good write. |
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Re: Light my Ciggarette
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:29:25 AM AEST
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This is poem has every thing and gives new
meaning 2 the phrase, in a phrase, lol i liked
it deffinately 2 the point and well stated very
nice . . .
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Re: Light my Ciggarette
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:17:48 AM AEST
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I liked the unlying tone in this...
Nice write
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Re: Light my Ciggarette
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:24:11 PM AEST
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The burn will heal, fade to a scar
But you will always be a star !!!
If scars help to build character ... I got more character than I need. Hope your OK and if you are gonna smoke after ___, get up outta bed so ya don't fall asleep next time ... LOL
Nazzy ~
( who needs more fingers to count how many times he's done that ) |
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Re: Light my Ciggarette
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:28:05 AM AEST
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I don't know too much about cigarette burns... but I do know some people who really seer my nerves. I think I can apply this to the world, and only hope that after I run them over the cops won't catch me...
The last line though has such an oppressive tone. Sad and Lonely, I healin' but no better. Hmmm.
Aq. |
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