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STD
Contributed by
b_rand
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:02:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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rub your skin until its raw
rub away your sins and flaws
rub your vessels til they thaw
and tiny scars line your jaw
tiny scars that act as mirrors
spreading out and getting clearer
a crying girl, but we can't hear her
damaged goods, a demon speared her
injecting evil in the pure
infecting people, spreading more
collecting steamloads for the war
reject the feeble, there's no cure
there's just a rash upon your face
sometimes a gash you can't erase
your body trashed and put to waste
unless you laugh and hurt the case
but don't be stupid, don't go out
don't give others what you've got now
show the world what you're about
be strong, live long, admit it proud
Copyright ©
b_rand
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2005-03-24 01:02:38]
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Re: STD
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:29:36 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done!!!!!! |
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Re: STD
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:39:00 AM AEST
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| well written, good job. |
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Re: STD
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:22:15 AM AEST
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| I really liked this. It was well put together and a good message. Nice job sweetie. |
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Re: STD
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:01:48 AM AEST
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| Very strong writing, i liked it a lot! |
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Re: STD
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 01:50:13 AM AEST
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| Awesome! Excellent write with a great message! Nice work. |
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Re: STD
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by Tatikaze on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 09:04:13 PM AEST
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| Great write.....bravo |
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Re: STD
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:49:48 PM AEST
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| Uplifting write. I love it. Good job! |
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Re: STD
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 06:46:47 PM AEST
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| I am speechless.. i loved this write.. good job |
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Re: STD
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:14:55 PM AEST
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You have a beautiful talent ! Not one verse was unjustified, wasted. Keep posting,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: STD
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by midnightwriter on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 12:31:32 AM AEST
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| damn good write, well done in capturing a hard topic like this one. |
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Re: STD
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by slogan on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:32:50 PM AEST
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| well written and express..good job....jh |
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Re: STD
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by rapnificent on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 11:50:21 PM AEST
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| Interestingl spooky. Direct. |
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Re: STD
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by Linds on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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| beautiful, you have amazing talent |
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Re: STD
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 08:16:29 PM AEST
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im sure no one wants to catch one of those! i know i dont
your message expands on so many areas of life
well done
take care
-K.Z. |
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