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Another Chance at Heaven
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:40:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't wait to see your face,
I miss you so much.
I'm longing for your embrace,
and waiting to feel your touch.
I can't stand going this long without seeing you,
my mind is on you 24/7.
This question I have is long overdue,
and I've never felt closer to heaven.
Just talking to you isn't enough for me,
I need to hold you close.
This love for you needs to be set free,
with each passing day it grows and grows.
I know in my heart we will again be one,
but the question is when?
What happened between us will be undone,
and part two will soon begin.
Copyright ©
Curtisc
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2005-03-24 00:40:38]
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Re: Another Chance at Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:13:40 AM AEST
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| THis is such a sweet write, just like your others. I'm glad things are going well for you again. You deserve it. |
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Re: Another Chance at Heaven
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:19:22 AM AEST
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Sounds exciting.
great write and good luck.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Another Chance at Heaven
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:30:04 AM AEST
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A beautifully written and expressed piece of poetry, Curtis. So heartfelt and so sweet. Another brillant poem written by you. A pleasant and enjoyable read. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Another Chance at Heaven
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:56:47 PM AEST
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Curtis my man beautiful poem filled with romantic longing and hope, whish u well my friend it's got 2 happen sooner or later . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Another Chance at Heaven
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:37:33 AM AEST
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| Well i hope all works out for u...i know it will. Great write once again!!! Tanya |
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