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This Skin
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:17:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Underneath this skin,
A part of me lies hidden.
I want to shed this layer of fakeness,
But I know it is forbidden.
It's like im suffocating,
As my vision blurrs away.
I hate being encased in this tomb,
I need to crawl out this skin someway.
Somehow I need to breakfree,
From this vessel that cradles my bones.
Im simply but surely fading,
Far away into the unknown.
This skin is useless,
It's my key to die.
I can cut away the madness,
But I cant hack away the whys.
No matter how deep I cut,
I can't reduce the inner ache.
This skin entraps me in its cell,
Screw this skin for God's sake!
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Pats4eva7
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2005-03-24 00:17:52]
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Re: This Skin
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by b_rand on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:28:17 AM AEST
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| good word play in the 4th verse. interesting rhyme schemes. pretty original. |
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Re: This Skin
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by WiltingSoul on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:32:43 AM AEST
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| That's very good. I can totally relate. Keep up the great work! |
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