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Cherry Blossoms
Contributed by
Tanna
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:51:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A solitary breeze twines through a lone cherry tree
Gently, it coaxes the frail blossoms to surrender themselves
Fragrant petals drift and flutter on a tranquil current
As the day closes, the mist shrouds the branches in a quiet embrace
The breeze is tamed by Gods soft caress.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2005-03-23 22:51:25]
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:34:08 PM AEST
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| Love the poem. The use of metaphore to get your point across was niffty to. |
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:41:37 PM AEST
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This is so beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:57:23 PM AEST
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An exquisite write...
the words themselves feel like a soft, fragrant breeze.
Well-expressed. |
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:03:51 PM AEST
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I like this. Simple, but elegant. Nicely done.
Andrew |
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