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Drowning in your head
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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There you are playing make believe,
Once again why are you so Naive?
Here you sit now, you are soaked in sorrow
Here you sit and drown in your own damn lies
Here you sit now with your life so hollow
Here you sit don't you try and deny it
Lies! They're in your head
Here you are, you fake it once again,
You make believe, why must you pretend?
Here you sit now and you say your something,
Here you sit and look down upon my life
Here you sit now, and your next to nothing
You cant hide here behind your masquerade,
I can see through you
You can try but its to late,
The time has come now for you
You're Drowning! Lies!
Here you are still playing make believe
But in the end you will be the one to see
Here you sit now with this life your leading,
Here you sit and look down upon my life
Here you sit now with the lies your bleeding
Lies! Lies! Lies! There stuck in your head!
Drowning! You cant save yourself now!
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Re: Drowning in your head
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:45:46 PM AEST
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Very good venting.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Drowning in your head
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by b_rand on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:26:58 AM AEST
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| Yes, very good vent poem. I wish you had referred back to the title more often. You did it very well in the first verse then drifted off ... oh well, great job! |
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