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Don’t You See What You’re Doing?
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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7:44 PM
3/23/2005
You don’t even see what you’re doing to me
You’re too blind to notice what is going on
Some how I wish I could make you disappear
You make me cry.
Making me feel like I should die
I can’t take anymore of your pain
Tears are streaming burning down my face
If you think you know me well – you’re wrong.
You have turned up your anger
Lashing it out toward your family
Did you know I snapped myself with a rubber band?
Holding back from slicing up my scaring skin
No you wouldn’t know until it comes too late.
You yell and *****
You grumble and groan
No way is there peace I’ll see tonight
Compromising with you is difficult some how.
I don’t know if I love you
I’m not sure I should care
How come you do this to me it just isn’t fair
You eat up my self-esteem.
You smash my hopes, my dreams
You ripe out my heart destroying its strength
Day time gets harder to be around you
Night time surrounds me in demons with death
I get scared of you its hard to take a breath.
You don’t see me I’m falling apart in front of you
You won’t understand my reason’s sometimes I don’t like you
I hide it all from you behind my clothes and soul.
© Care Strom
Copyright ©
KishaLovesCare126
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2005-03-23 21:04:38]
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Re: Don’t You See What You’re Doing?
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by breny on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:29:09 PM AEST
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wow I have a poem like this about my mom.
i can't post it because it isn't appropriate.
But I know what you're going through.
Great Write :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Don’t You See What You’re Doing?
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by ruthann on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 07:49:01 AM AEST
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| i know my own just doesnt get it, i am a nothing your poem is so beautiful, someone understands thanks |
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