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She Dances
Contributed by
breny
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:02:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She dances in the moonlight
at a place to far to see
where worries and frustrations
have jumped behind the trees
She dances to the music
that rises from the stream
where no one else can see her
except the moons friendly beam
She dances to forget
the pain she's going through
She wants to reverse it
and inflict it back on you
She dances until sunrise
when she knows she has to leave
to a world full of weeping
where nothing's what is seems
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-03-23 19:02:07]
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Re: She Dances
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:39:14 PM AEST
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Works beautiful bren, any thing from the heart
can't miss along with u writting it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: She Dances
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by CodyJ on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:03:19 PM AEST
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| should have taken it further. still good. kudos |
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Re: She Dances
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:12:57 PM AEST
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| wow i think i've been missing out on your stuff, this was truly beautiful. i enjoyed the sense of continuity and repetition in this, you've really done well here, i loved this! |
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Re: She Dances
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:13:47 PM AEST
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| a very sentual peice i like it |
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