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Her Wings Can Never Dry
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:08:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wouldn't you give almost anything to feel happy again?
(There were still drops of salt water that had spilled from her eyes.)
Give almost everything to see an angel, just so you could believe.
(No matter what time, those tears will never dry.)
To not care about where you end up tommarow.
(She left her mark upon the world.)
To let your old wounds heal, and let go of your sorrow.
(She'd never know.)
To be able to wake up content, and sleep a sweet dreamless sleep.
(She lost herself somewhere in that haze we all find ourselves wondering through.)
To be able to walk on solid ground, and leave the hole that we felt was growing far too deep.
(There was no one there in the places she wondered to.)
To finally open these waterlogged wings to the sun.
(She fell to her knees wracked in sobs.)
And to fly away, when our pain is gone.
(She found what she thought was her only way out.)
She had been wrong.
(She had been wrong.)
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Re: Her Wings Can Never Dry
(User Rating: 1 ) by b_rand on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST (User
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This is pretty good. The title fits perfectly! Very well constructed. |
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Re: Her Wings Can Never Dry
(User Rating: 1 ) by Inevitable on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:19:49 PM AEST (User
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I liked the parts in the parenthesis best. |
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