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You were and are my first love...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:01:26 PM in AEST
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I flutter around the house thinking
Of how charming he really is
I daydream all kinds of things
Matching my Name with His
I try on new make-up
and some perfume too
I imagine me and him
And all the things we could do
We could go dancing
Or hang around the park
The list goes on and on
We be together until dark
Nothing could hurt us
We are so in love
I feel like i could fly
Like a white baby dove
All the things i'd get him
All the times we'd share
All the joys of living
No more dark days of despair
These are the happy days
No more silly shoves
We are together forever
Your my first true love
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:15:43 PM AEST
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| This is a great discription of what love should be. I hope that it is like that for me when I fall in love. |
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by gothman666 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:25:17 PM AEST
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| i love this poem it kind of souds like something i would right you should check out some of mine my name is gothman666 |
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by tecnorobo on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:03:31 PM AEST
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| I've yet to feel real love, good write. |
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:31:40 PM AEST
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There are always first loves, and whether the relationship dies in some form or another, the memory lives on. Cherish the good stuff -
Thanks for this -
mj |
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:33:29 AM AEST
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| I've got butterflies in my stomach reading this one, that's the mark of great writer! Keep it up. |
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Re: You were and are my first love...
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:07:20 AM AEST
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It's terribly hard to love someone that you are not with... but you've made it so much less painful and so very lovely. There are many here, I'm sure, that will envy your ability to do so.
Lovely,
~SNM~ |
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