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Angel With Broken Wings
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:27:07 AM in AEST
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I am an angel with broken wings,
To my soul all my despair clings,
Digging its claws in drawing blood,
Dropping me to the ground do you hear the thud?
I once was beautiful & full of grace,
Floating with love in its heavenly place,
But now I lay dying in the pits of depression,
On my heart hurt has left such an impression.
Sometimes I am too weak to even cry,
So I just sit & let out a deep sigh,
One that goes unheard, falling upon deaf ears,
The pain of loneliness is behind my un-fallen tears.
To get to my feet is all I can manage,
As this little angel has suffered too much damage,
Behind my smiles are years of buried despair,
But nobody ever sees what’s behind my empty stare.
I am an actress who hides her hurt well,
Suffering in silence battling with her hell,
If ever anyone asks weather I’m alright,
I nod my head in the day & fall apart at night.
I have long fallen into the devils trap,
Upon my battered soul he wraps,
Pushing & tempting me with my own death,
Trying to rid me of my final breath.
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pixie
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2005-03-23 11:27:07]
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:13:21 PM AEST
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AHHH, BUT THE DEVIL CAN'T WRITE POETRY LIKE U PIX, HIS WEAKNESS
AND YOUR VICTORY LOVELY PEICE OF WRITTING AS ALWAYS . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:24:16 PM AEST
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aw krissy, they say anyone who has been hurt can sing the blues i think its the same with this type of poetry, u cant write it if u dont feel it.
love h xxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:11:57 PM AEST
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Great write pixie, sad, depressive.
Love ya,
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:00:00 PM AEST
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Another brilliant write...
how you keep coming up with these poems I'll never know!
5 stars again!
cheers!~ |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:29:12 PM AEST
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Awww Pixie...I don't know how you do it, but you do it so well... Your poems are always so classy, whether they are happy ones or sad ones.
Don't ever stop writing my dear friend....
I miss chatting with you. School closes soon so I hope to catch up a little..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:32:08 PM AEST
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I loved this Pix. As usual another beautiful heartfelt write. I can really relate to this Stanza.
I am an actress who hides her hurt well,
Suffering in silence battling with her hell,
If ever anyone asks weather I’m alright,
I nod my head in the day & fall apart at night.
Thats usally an everyday routine for me.
Again i loved this. Great job.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:56:40 PM AEST
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Krissie u have portrayed this poem very well.
The image u cast in the readers mind is that of lost pure innocence. A sad, but outstanding piece of poetry. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:35:08 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful Pixie and so very sad. One day your wings will heal. The mist will clear and lift the dark clouds.
Love Angelxxxxxx |
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Re: Angel With Broken Wings
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:14:38 AM AEST
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You have true talent... what more can I say?? Stunningly beautiful.
*~Erin~* |
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