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Will my heart ever heal?
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:27:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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They say in time pain will heal
The hurt I have
Is so agonishing and real
It's been a year,
But I can't forget
My heart is broken and
Full of regret
How much longer must I wait
To finally rid myself from all
this hate
Time has passed and it still
ticks away
As the anger and despair settle
in for another day
I try and live life
But I just can't cope
I've cried tears and I'm losing hope
Bitterness and resentment
Confine in my heart
As the memory of you tears me
apart
I try to smile and make amends
An act to cover up, so I pretend
For the one man I gave my heart to
Has packed his bag and said we're
through
He deserted me, looking me straight
in the face
Said that I crammed his style and
That he needed some space
So now this heart lays black and
charred
Ignominy and deeply marred
I'm still waiting on time to heal these
scars
As I silently watch the cascading stars
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-03-23 05:27:49]
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:02:20 AM AEST
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Oh Sue...this was heartwrenching and so sad, but so lovely...
Hope all is well...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:22:12 AM AEST
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aw sue this is so sad. great write
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:43:56 AM AEST
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Dear Sue,
Sorry this year has been so hard for you...
surely when you least expect it something good will be waiting for you...just around the corner...[with open arms!]
ps...I loved your write...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:03:29 AM AEST
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One day you'll look back and realized you've healed. also u might jus wonder what it was that made u think u luved him.
I'm speaking from experience.
Hindsight is much better than forsight.
Good write, my friend so hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:15:34 AM AEST
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Yes, this is a poem that goes right to the heart.
It took me five years to move on and I wrote alot during those five years to keep my insanity. Now as I look back, I realize that his life didn't stop his went on, while mine paused.
May your heart heal soon and may you smile, genuinely smile again.
A very moving poem.
Kie |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:52:35 AM AEST
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A sad but beatuitiful writting filled with emotions of the heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:20:15 AM AEST
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Give your heart time to heal Sue. It hurts like crazy dont it, but it will get better. Do not put your life on hold. I speak from experience. So many wasted years of crying and closing my heart to others. Hoping you find some comfort in your friends arms and that in time your heart can shine once more
A wonderful write
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:12:51 AM AEST
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Awww Sue *hugs* your heart is hurting now, but in time it will heal, the scars will remian but you will find happiness again, you deserve it so much, a sad and very emotionally deep poem,
pix xx |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by dvsnme816 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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Such a surreal poem. Makes me feel as though I was watching every second of it, and it hurts...it is really saddening and is like a bird lost from home...it builds a new one. Build a new house and forget the past, my dear. Your heart will heal, it just needs some one able to touch it to clean the "infection" out, and surely the wound will heal.
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 07:04:02 PM AEST
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Wow.. this one nearly left me speachless. Wonderful write. I am trying to get over my first love right now. Love is one thing the human brain never seems to comprehend. I still ask question but i get the same results. I'm sorry your hurting so badly. It will in fact heal, in do time. Till then hold your head up and don't let the person know your hurting. They feed off that. Great write. Very heartfelt. Much love.
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! I THING YOUR HEART CAN STILL TAKE ALOT,BECAUSE IT WAS THE SAME HEART USED TO WRITE THIS!! I GUES HE JUST DIDN'T REALIZE WHAT HE WAS LOSING!!! TO BAD FOR HIM!!!
CARRY ON MY DEAR!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:54:43 PM AEST
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| you amaze and impress me with your brilliance. this was perfect yet again. i loved this. your talent is clearly expressed. and yet again, i can relate. |
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Re: Will my heart ever heal?
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by jmpy84 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:19:24 AM AEST
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| so sad but great write |
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