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First Time, Unreal
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:36:47 AM in AEST
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Unreal
Unexpected and is
Nothing less of a miracle so
Rare to find in this life time so much yet
Everlasting is not enough when
All that in this world that has me in awe are the
Little things that are noticed as much as the large
This is how our love is
The first time
I saw you I felt alive
We were apart a day and then were reunited and rejoiced I knew we could survive
You said you loved me I almost died
You said I was perfect I almost cried
Some one came close to hurting you again I almost went out of my mind
You said for always I knew that is how long I wanted you to be mine
We are together will be the happiest of my life
I will feel my life’s work is almost complete is the day you agree to be my wife
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Re: First Time, Unreal
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:41:33 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful poem expressed well.
I liked this style of poetry, you did it very well.
A delightful piece so heart warming and very pleasant to read. Well Done.
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Re: First Time, Unreal
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by HellsLibrarian on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:23:40 AM AEST
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| pretty. |
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Re: First Time, Unreal
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:39:14 AM AEST
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such a beautiful poem,
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Re: First Time, Unreal
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:22:16 AM AEST
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Bravo well done Sir Ben.
I really enjoyed this one
Wonderful
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Re: First Time, Unreal
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:37:36 PM AEST
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We were apart a day and then were reunited and rejoiced I knew we could survive
You said you loved me I almost died
You said I was perfect I almost cried
Some one came close to hurting you again I almost went out of my mind
It's nice to read such words, another amazing write John. |
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